The president of USA has been kidnapped a few weeks ago. Nobody has a trace about who would kidnap the president. His wife was crying every day and night. But after a few weeks someone called at the white house. Obama's wife answered the phone.
-Hello...
-Do you ever want to see your husband again? someone asked.
-Who is this? she asked
-Do as I say or your husband dies!
-What do you want me to do?
-Do you know the Golden Gate Bridge?
-Yes.
-Midnight, on the bridge. Come alone.
-But the bridge is far and...hello...hello... , but the person on the other end closed the phone.
Obama's wife was not feeling so safe knowing that if she goes on the bridge alone she might get hurt. She was afraid that she could kidnap too.
What an exciting start:)
ReplyDeleteLook at this sentence: "Nobody has a trace about who would kidnap the president." You can't say "has a trace about who". Can you come up with another way of saying what you want to say?
The police doesn't who would kidnap the president.
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